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AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01
Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

0 posted 2000-07-22 02:36 AM


Darkness pours into my soul,
Drenching me with a numbness,
A cold, dark, tormenting sleep,
That will not let go of its hold on me,
It has me trapped,
Desperately searching for a place to hide,
I feel like an animal caged in my own hell,
A hell that is my imagination,
There is no way to stop the images,
And no way to close my eyes,
Where can I go?
What can I do?
There is nowhere to go,
And there is nothing to do,
I have to play it out,
Pray that I don’t crumble,
But pray to who?
There is no God,
Not one that cares,
So who do I pray to?
You?
You wouldn’t believe me!
You wouldn’t trust me!
No, I can’t pray to you,
You let me down,
You said you would never leave me
You did,
So who do I pray to?
Who will listen?
There is no one,
No one,
No one.




Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
~Beautiful~
~Creed~

© Copyright 2000 Michelle - All Rights Reserved
Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-22 10:50 AM


Ahhh, but there IS, AngelShell...You have all of us here in Dark Passions...and we are family.  Welcome home, Baby...this is where you belong.  Here you will find the comfort of strong loving arms that will encircle you, protect you...and be there for you.  Stay with us...you will see.  I love your poem...it speaks to so many of us here.  Nice job.  Hardrock
Rex
Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas
2 posted 2000-07-22 11:47 AM


AngelShell....Welcome to Dark Passions.  As Hardrock says, here you will find a warm, friendly place. Nice job on your first post.  

Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.

-William Wordsworth-

Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-07-22 01:58 PM


Even in our darkest hours, there is always someone who shares our pain. Nicely done!  
a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

4 posted 2000-07-22 02:05 PM


Welcome, and as Hardrock says...here this is us....and here you are welcome to share all. We all know the pain
again and again
but here at least we stand as one.
wonderful first post...awaiting more...


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

5 posted 2000-07-22 10:15 PM


Welcome, Angel! I lovedyour first post, it seems from the look of things, you're gonna fit in here quite nicely.  
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

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