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Perpetual Memory |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Perpetual Memory When my memory fails will you sing to me The songs in my heart that lie silently? And whisper with kisses of our walks in the rain When we splashed in the moments of loving again. Will you whisper your "tender" with afternoon eyes, And love me 'til evening 'til the dark carries sighs? And the days become nights within arms to be laced When my memory fails, will you capture it's place? In the shadows of moonlight when thoughts disappear Caressing with lips, will you kiss away fear? In the candlelight touches holding moments with me, Will you share in my journey making new "memory"? When my memory fails into eyes of mine, stare All the moments of you shall be mirrored in there. M 2k |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Awesome, Hot, thought provoking. Simply delicious!!!!!!! |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Gosh my mom is slowly losing her memory..this poem touches a spot in my heart. Beautiful words! Sad sentiments, Good Job!!!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So beautiful, I see this as the plea of a woman for her lover to be there as she ages. But it could mean so many things. Lovely. Catalinamoon |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Xeonox ...such a tasty compliment..*wink thank you ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Deborah1...I have the worst memory and I am not even old..at least by some standards..and I wonder what will happen in my life...yes I had your Mom in mind, Deborah ~~soft thoughts Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
catalinamoon...yes a plea.. a hope..a wish thank you for reading ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
That was very nice Maureen - I liked the poem very much. You will never forget - of that I am sure Deepak |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I guess I have a different view of this.. I see this as someone whose memory has faded (because of age?) and the partner must refresh their shared moments. Good poem!  |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
If only I could tell you how much these words mean to me....but it would seem trivial, I would suppose.... this touched me deeply, indeed!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
MMoon..I lost someone to Alzheimers...I know this feeling well. You captured the very essence of the fear someone feels when they become aware of their plight. Hardrock |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Deepak (demoninlove)..thank you, I do have a rotten memory when it comes to song titles, and artists ..have no idea why...maybe I just believe them to not be so important as long as I remember the words and feelings to them... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Poet deVine...I think it wonderful when each can gain a significance out of words, for that is what should be meant..not so much my intentions..but what you feel from it. thank you...and yes that is what I worry about..although his will probably go first...memory that is. ~~soft smiles M |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
a-alibaster...nothing you say could be trivial to me..I am a wonderful listener and if you would like to say it in an email you are welcome to....it is always good to know that you touched someone with words...and that they share in your feelings. ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Hardrock...I am sorry for that loss..I have friends who have lost their family members and neighbors who have left me here in the last so many years...it is sad and hard on everyone..I am hoping it never happens to me and that I never forget everything that has meaning to me in life.. thank you for sharing ~~softly hugging you Maureen |
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