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Death Reborn |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
Death A whirling, gnashing pit of doom. A place where oblivion ruled. A time of sleep with no dreams. A place of nothing, less then nothing. Gone, forever... lost, void. No thought No feeling Nothing. A bright light A beautiful thing. Death no longer held me in fear. It was the rebirth the step to take for new thoughts new actions. Feeling as another Knowing more. An endless cycle, one would never be lost. Always to find your way home. Beautiful. -------------------------- While the peom is new (I wrote it 10 minutes ago) the revelation is not. It's too bad, though, that it began in the conversations in the wake of the suicide of a 12 year old girl. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Magebeast, a lovely poem. So uplifting at the end! It can be applied to life too! But the suicide of a 12 year old girl makes me shudder. What a terrible tragedy! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I agree this is so sad, the thought of a 12 yr old committing suicide, so awful....Your poem was very very good, and a nice ending. The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Mag...beautiful poem..nice theme. I like the construction. Hardrock |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
yes even in death there are two sides to the story. the good and the bad. wonderful mage!! truly. my prayers to you my friend now and always. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mage, very good poem, and so sad that a young girl died. I wrote about a young friend who also committed suicide, a few weeks ago. So tragic a loss. Peace Catalinamoon |
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