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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392


0 posted 2000-07-21 01:16 PM


I AM ALL OF THESE THINGS

...And the master of them all has now taken over.
Do not ever think that you will run for cover.
For I will find you and place my golden spun noose around you
until your lovely skin turns a
precious shade of blue.
I will take
you and shake
you until you are mine.
I will rip to shreads what you consider your strong spine.
I will make you do inconcevable things
and make you dance like a puppet up on sickening strings.
I am what doubt,pain,oblivion, and limbo brings.

I am Evil
I am all of these things.


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

© Copyright 2000 a-alibaster (H.A.R.) - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-07-21 02:14 PM


OK, just a touch too creepy for me.. Chills, looking under the bed stuff. But great poem if it didn't scare me.  
Cat..

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-21 02:16 PM


Well done, Affy!!!  You have captured so well the darkness of evil...I mean, this is sooo Goth.  I needed this...I was being so overtaken by light (see poem, "10,000 Towels).  Thank you O Dark Mistress...Hardrock
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-07-22 08:44 PM


~"Dark Mistress",...indeed!!! Geesh,...*shivers*, you evil little thing you.  This is sooo incredibly haunting and intense. Love it!!! Be well A. *Peace.
Wren
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

4 posted 2000-07-22 11:02 PM


Chilling! I got shivers...... This is really intense stuff!
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

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