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Why Must Love Die - Nobody?
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Why Must Love Die - Nobody? |
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glidingdove Junior Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 13 |
WHY MUST LOVE DIE - NOBODY? I saw love dying in his eyes today! The love that was the sweetest melody yesterday, It was a never-ending excitement, Life was sheer enchantment, Each moment gave birth to a new thrill, Life was a sheer dancing drill, Suddenly today I saw him drawn to distant shores, Life became a drudging chore, Suddenly spontaneity was lost, Mutual compassion and care was no more, His heart never reached out to me like before, Erasing memories of our past his soul flew afar, I was struck with shock! How could love suddenly stall? Was it the death of a dream Nobody? Or the only tangible reality I knew? Abha |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
man oh man this is one powerful poem!!! the rhyme, the flow, the emotion. so raw. and that last line... only tangible reality i knew... whoo whee... excellent work here!!!! kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Someone is on fire and it's not me. LOL. hot!!!!!!!!!!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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