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Evil Spirits |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Evil Spirits Let’s exorcise The demon That gnaws away Your dreams Let’s fill your mind With beauty visions Until that demon screams Let’s exorcise The devil That eats away Your hope Let’s fill your heart With joyous love Until that devil chokes And when these vicious fiends Scrabble blindly on the floor We’ll catch them in a honey jar And throw them out the door  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta..I really believe you could!! I like this...dark with just a hint of whimsey. Girl, I DO love the way you write. Hardrock |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~UH HUH,...Let's do it!!! Right on Uta! Clever little thing you,...this is so great. Be well U. *Peace. |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
I like this piece, nice imagery. Looks like I'll have to get some honey jars! |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I love the concept of doing something, and then finishing it off like you did, very creative!!! Loved it!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
<< Loved it! Lovely, joyous and sweet poem. Really uplifted my spirits! (Another string on that bow I see!)  Allan |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
wish I had the power to take control of all my demons. Great poem. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
Awesome Poem! I can really empathize with what's going on... |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Spitfire, Deb, Xeonox, Magebeast, THANKS  Hardrock, I wish I could! Ian, you have to make sure there's still some honey in the jar. The demons don't like sweet things. We want them to get stuck in sweetness, don't we? Alan, What string in what bow? Can a bow have several strings? Am I dim? Have I missed something? Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Uta...I really enjoyed this one. Very, very good! Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I liked this also, especially with the happy ending. Great work, as always. Cat... |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
How wonderful if all "demons" could be dealt with in this way. I really enjoyed this piece, especially the "solution" at the end. Linda |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes lets do all that you say in this poem it is great and you should keep it up. wonderful word play here as well enjoyed it much. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
LOL! Loved the ending Uta!  |
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