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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Raw I stand before you stripped... you view it all before you emptiness, loneliness, paleness shivering in the cool afternoon air. No strength have I to redress... will leave it up to you What would you do first? Would you cover my nakedness with warm hands, releasing their feel of life upon me? Would you envelop me in strong arms holding me up and absorbing my shivering into that of your calmness? Can you see yourself placing your trust in a body, so feared of life that to move an inch to the right or left is an "impossible" do? Or will you leave me standing naked in my rawness, suffering continuing on in silent wait for time to take me and place me in some other universe where all things are allowed to just "be"? M 2k |
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DeathTrippy Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45WY USA |
Hopeless feelings. I've felt this way before. You'll find that only after can you see who covered you and who let you just "be." |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
MMoonchild...This is awesome. Great imagery here. And such emotions. Hope to see more from you. Hardrock |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Your imagery here is wonderful. I enjoyed this morning read greatly! Awaiting more... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
DeathTrippy..wise reponse D, appreciate the words *smiles*...Maureen Hardrock..I have just started posting in poetry #8...noticed the darker ones here and thought I would post those of mine I usually write in another name ..when I am in my Captvsol mood... thank you *s a-alibaster...just posted another for you "Not the Forever of Yesterday" thank you all for reading and commenting ~~softly Maureen |
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