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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-07-21 01:01 AM


Walls of demons surround me in agony,

Spells are chanted continually,

Fire of dread plummet from beyond,

Missing souls sensing this torment,

Shifting of blood tides bring forth the faces,

Threads of dusk sealing this lips,

Here life is broken undyingly,

No sign of closure,

For end doesn’t survive.

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Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).


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kynder
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1 posted 2000-07-21 01:27 AM


and how does one reply to this??  all i can say is what an image you make play in my brain.  


kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

Jaysun C
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2 posted 2000-07-21 02:28 AM


you survive in a dark place
and your words bring it to me
all has been said that i kneed to know
that yours is a place i'd rather not go

but much do i like to hear your screams
from below


Xeonox
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3 posted 2000-07-21 02:30 AM


Thank you Jaysun C for your lovely comments. You have said it better than my poem itself.


Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Magebeast
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4 posted 2000-07-21 04:19 AM


Images...so many images...
Xeonox
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5 posted 2000-08-26 02:36 AM


I try to show images rather than meaning so that you the readers can make your own meaning.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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