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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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My web of lies, Pulling you in. Strangely pretty, Deceptively sweet. Making you blind To the truth coming From behind. It's gonna smack you Upside your head, Barrel through your soul, Shatter your heart. You will look back with Regret from the start. Blissful ignorance.... You had it in your grasp. Then you just had to go and ask. And now there you are, Wallowing in knowing. Let me reveal myself... Just call me Black Widow. *****kynder < !signature--> Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson [This message has been edited by kynder (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hot damn Kynder!!! "Strangely pretty, Deceptively sweet."....very neat lines. "Barrel through your soul," "Blissful ignorance...."....Uum,..why don't I just write your whole poem in this. hehe. All so great,but heart heavy. Be well K. *Peace. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-22-2000).] |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
We do that so often to ourselves. Knowing something is not right, but afraid to ask because we fear the outcome...and then, asking. Even the mate of the Black Widow knows that his chances of survival in the encounter are low...but he just has to try. Nice one, Kynder. Hardrock |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
Unfortunately, this is quite accurate. I know several people like this. Beautifully put... as much as it stings to read it. "Every great century that produces art is, so far, an artificial century, and the work that seems the most natural and simple of its time is always th |
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DeathTrippy Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45WY USA |
Brings one person to mind... I survived but just barely and not in the best mental health. I'm all healed now though. Very well written. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Would you be my black widow? lol. Great poem Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well Sis if your the Black Widow. I guess that makes me the Black Widower. (LOL). i love you sis why you feel this way? Email me and let me know what's wrong i care about so please don't leave me hanging SIS. enjoyed this a great deal. thanks for posting. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
kynder, excellent poem and yes it stings with the venom of a poison spider. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Wow Kynder! Top notch! I have known such people too! There's a story by Hanns Heinz Ewers ... (sorry, was about to babble aimlessly  )Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very interesting, Kynder. I take it that you have experienced this person in a particularly painful way..True? Perfect description. Cat.. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
How we ignore that "practical Intuition"...This was superb!!! We know better and do it anyways, Just excellent writing here!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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