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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
-Autumn Ages- brightly colored leaves spot the ground new trees not sure of what the've found holiday masks worn in a time of fun mother nature has only just begun she has decided upon a slowly drastic change summer's sun must reduce the flames in time we will give our thanks as birds travel to more stable banks i've seen this time come and go on with the show the crystals will arrive at any time the ground will glisten, it will shine but as of now, the leaves they fall a change is again within us all for every year, tear, and peer has seen yet another fear and as the human war it wages we live through these autumn ages J.L. Koehler Comments very welcome. TIA |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Truly a masterpiece,...am quite impressed. Welcome here,...hope to see more of you. Be well CD. *Peace. |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
Thank you for your kind words. This place is great. I just wish I'd found this forum long ago. You will definately see more of me. I noticed another member has the nick/ carolinamoon, I really hope they don't mind what I've picked for my nickname. |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
this is really great...welcome to the forums  ...can't wait for your next post.EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Welcome J.L....from Hardrock in SC. I identify so well with this because I live where we have real seasonal changes. Your depiction of the autumn changes are so vivid. And, yes, you will like it here in DP. "It's a lovely place, it's a lovely place" (Eagles, Hotel California) Hardrock |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very well done CD, and, welcome home! jwesley |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, welcome to DP. Autumn is my most loved time of year, and this was very beautiful. I'm Catalina moon, not Carolina, anyway, so don't worry, we do kind of have the same sound to the names.I don't mind at all. Peace "Keep dreams alive, for if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly." author unknown |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
Great Stuff! I could really "see" what you were writing about! |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Dark Passions! And what a beautiful first post. Great job Friend!  Peace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Loved this poem. Welcome to passions. Carolina is my home.. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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