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meara
Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 15


0 posted 2000-07-20 07:49 PM


My heart is aching,
for your touch,
the one that I,
have felt so much.
Just a memory remains,
left for my soul,
of the peace you,
used to suscitate each day.


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SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-07-20 08:26 PM


~Meara,...so well expressed this longing here. Short and so to the point. Super. Take care M. *Peace.
Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-20 11:13 PM


meara...I agree with SF...short heart-deep emotions here.  Good job.  Hardrock
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2000-07-20 11:52 PM


Hardrock might agree with Spitfire, but I'll up the ante...I AGREE WITH BOTH OF THEM!


jwesley

[This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 07-20-2000).]

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