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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392


0 posted 2000-07-20 12:03 PM


(some one asked to to dig up some more of my older words, so here you are. This was written  8-3-98, hope you enjoy)


UPON MY LIPS

Upon my lips
lies a solid silver,inverted crucifix.
Upon my lips lays
words of Ancients and despise.
Upon my lips
are whispers of gentle violet tulips.
Upon my lips
there is the ability to sink a thousand ships.
Upon my lips
lays words of spells cast
in the ancient past.
Upon my lips
are bloods stained whips.
Upon my lips
are heart sickening memories
of past enimies.
Upon my lips
lays the powers of painful pleasures in kindred drips.
Upon my lips
lays the powers of succubus...
lascivious.
Upon my lips
you will find every loning, sinful kiss.
8-3-98


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

© Copyright 2000 a-alibaster (H.A.R.) - All Rights Reserved
Magebeast
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60

1 posted 2000-07-20 12:09 PM


I've never read the poem, so I'm gonna respond.  This was awesome!
Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-20 12:10 PM


Affy...some dark stuff here...chilling.  Amazing what changes occur in only two years.  This is good stuff.  Hardrock
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-07-20 12:11 PM


WOW! Nice "old" poem.  
Truely great work

DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
4 posted 2000-07-21 12:23 PM


i really enjoy the rhythym of this one!!  i bet you have volumes upon volumes of masterpieces just waiting to be dusted off and reborn!!  great work, really.

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

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