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A Little Warning....... |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
If you go into the wood today Beware the fox Beware the bear And always, child, Remember this: Trust not the wolf Though he smiles with his eyes His teeth are there To bite you When you go into the wood today Beware the fox Beware the bear And always, child, Remember this: Trust not the woodsman Though he smiles with his eyes..... You know what he will do To a little girl like you Beware! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Eeek Wren,...this is freakin' me out.  . Powerful and entertaining and ooh, chills. Yup! Be well W. *Peace. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Yeah, this one gave me goosebumps! Reminded me of the stories my sis used to tell me when we were little  Excellent work! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So this is Little "Wren" Riding Hood? Great adaptation with a serious message. And yes, I got chills too. We do have to beware, not just the obvious danger, but sometimes also those who pretend to be friends. "Keep dreams alive, for if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly." author unknown |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Brilliant! Beware the woodsman indeed, for the greatest fiend comes in human guise (no offence to woodsmen, of course, I know you're not all like that !). Great poem, Wren!!!  Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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