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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-07-19 05:09 PM

I know it's hard
to gather up the pieces of your broken heart
and try again.
Hard to let go of remembered pain.
Yet the holding on hurts even more.
It will still find you,
wherever you hide.
In the darkest cave, or behind
the thickest of doors.
Just give yourself up.
Don't bother looking back-
you won't escape.
Surrender.
You might as well go willingly,
as be arrested.

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

1 posted 2000-07-19 06:23 PM

I like this Cat...its very hard to face the difficult and hurtful things. I too will try to turn my back when the pain is overwhelming...You WILL get through my friend!! Loved the last line. Great poem!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-07-19 07:13 PM

Such struggles suck - we both know that!! Hon one last time - accept my apologies, it was beyond my control...
This was excellent and describes how I feel right about now..

*hugs*

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Wren
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 312

3 posted 2000-07-19 07:15 PM

Very good comparison! Great poem! (And so true!)
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

LarBear
Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 138
Kingston, New York

4 posted 2000-07-19 08:22 PM

Sandra,

How do you do it? Its like you were talking to me darlin`. I just want you too know Iam here for ya anytime. Great way to express yourself!

LarBear (-:

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

5 posted 2000-07-19 08:24 PM

Ooh yeah, expressed very well. Holding on does hurt even more... great poem!

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

6 posted 2000-07-20 12:53 PM

Sandra...So good...and good for me. What a nice poem. If love comes around, I'll be the first to raise the white flag. Thanks...Hardrock

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

7 posted 2000-07-20 04:48 AM

WoWee.
What truth there is in your words:
Always try again.
Never give up.
You could miss out on the best thing in life otherwise!
BrillllliANT!!!

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

8 posted 2000-07-21 12:17 PM

very good work here, moonbeam. it is good to see hope in your work.

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

9 posted 2000-07-21 05:40 PM

this is a great poem i really enjoyed it and understand it totaly. keep it up my friend and i hope you find that love.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

10 posted 2000-07-22 08:18 PM

~"Yet the holding on hurts even more."....SO,SO true. Also,....very difficult like you said,...Cat, you've done it here. You've described this so well. Take care you. *Peace.

[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-22-2000).]

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