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demoninlove
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 211
Dehradun

0 posted 2000-07-19 11:15 AM


'Tis a paradox of inequity predestined
With the bliss of eternal love entwined,
How else could it be, that despair itself
Into the lover's heart, its way does find?





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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-07-19 10:16 PM


~"'Tis a paradox of inequity predestined",...Oh ouch this one.  I enjoyed your ways and words written. Much enjoyed although a sting in it. Take care D. *Peace.


[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-19-2000).]

LarBear
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 138
Kingston, New York
2 posted 2000-07-19 10:27 PM


Oh so quick to the point!!'

Good job.

LarBear  )

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
3 posted 2000-07-19 11:41 PM


Deep thinking required---lol

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
4 posted 2000-07-20 10:11 AM


Such inequity: Despair in a lover's heart.  Well done, Deepak.  Hardrock
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