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Drop a Tear |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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(this is an indepth look at myself and how, who and why I am as I am. written in '99) DROPED A TEAR I almost droped a tears... but please,never fear... I caught it just in time. To know that tears fall from the eyes of Darkness would be a crime. To know that in all of my dark wisdom there is also loathesome angony would be to impossible for me to admitt. Here in my world I sit... every one looking to me, thinking all of the answers I should see. To know that I am extremely different is not at all times a gift sent. To know that I hunger for things that make others quiver once, only once, in a grand while, makes me shiver. To know that others step in to my darkness with aprehention has never been my intention. To know that when one can feel my presents but never view my existance in its own right, is my resistance. I almost droped a tear... but never fear... for I know few others will ever tread here. "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
To the poet  Very sad - dont feel so deeply - this world never does understand the depths of emotion. To Ali Very nice.Deepak |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
"To know that I am extremely different...." I often have the feeling. But I stand in your presence, without apprehension, without fear...enthralled by your ability to turn a phrase that captures so well the feeling inside me. Thanks for sharing...Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is extrememly captivating. Vivid and poignant. I loved it, and I do know the pain of feeling different in some way. Or many ways. I really enjoy all your poems. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
This demonstrates deep emotions. There is never one way to feel...I think this was done extremely well, please share more!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
a-alibaster, I will have to agree with Hard Rock. The people that read the poems on Dark Passions, are here to listen to our emotions, and enterject that ever so needed support. I for one have gained a world of friends here. If I have no where to turn, I can simply write my feelings down, no matter how messed up they are, and share them here. We are differant, yet no quite so. Very captivating. LarBear |
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