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I Sit Alone " My Orginal Name" Yeppie.....
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I Sit Alone " My Orginal Name" Yeppie..... |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York 
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I Sit Alone I sit alone though the night Wanting so badly to hold you tight Yearning to feel your body so close Bundled emotions I can’t expose Stars glow deep in the sky I sit alone and start to cry Tear by tear I try to hide Writing my heart out, I have tried My poems with much meaning My heart careening I remember the romance so strong A love, that may be wrong I sit alone, my soul in agony Is this love a tragedy? I miss you so dearly My love poured out so clearly Longing for your romance Desire for your chance I sit alone, in torment Our hearts dissent Looking to the heavens for the answers This love has a growing cancer Dangerous you once said This cancer has spread Darkened my soul Your love has took its toll Once things were better Once I thought forever I sit alone, bleeding from within My love for you has worn too thin I hope your future is bright Without me in your sights I need better than this This love a complete abyss July 18, 2000 [This message has been edited by LarBear (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Lar, just moving my note over here. LOL. Great poem, heartfelt, and I love it. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
So lovely and so lonely. I loved it! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Looking to the heavens for the answers...I have looked many times, this was insightful, really enjoyed. The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Well, I tell ya, I didnt think that so many people had some of the same feelings that have developed in me. Its nice to know that I am able to touch a few, and be supported at the same time. Thanks, LarBear |
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kari Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104Hyde Park, Ut, USA |
What an expressive feeling... I too have felt. Nicely done. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~What a complete and total outpour of emotions from one's heart here. Outstanding expression. Be well LB. *Peace. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Woah! Yeah, a lot of emotion in this one! You expressed the feeling very well indeed  Excellent poem! |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
I loved the rhythm this one had, it was very deep, descriptive, painfull, yet diagnostic. It was fast furious and totally full of emotion. Great work!!! "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
However hard one is hit - the love never ends Lar - your poem says that clearly despite the disclaimer in the last part of it... Love on Deepak |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
A heart-wrenching poem, larbear! A dying love is hard to bear  , but I'm sure you won't be alone forever! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
LarBear, Oh my, how I relate to this one. We havce all been there at one time or another. You are far from alone. Great writing!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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