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Life Goes On |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I know the sun rises every day, I just can't see it anymore. My heart remains obscured behind heavy clouds. It rains more and more and the rainbow is missing. Life goes on and on.. Interminable lonliness, a vague memory of tattered happiness. Something has to change, because this life is changing me, and it's not a good thing. I ponder how far my mind can roam and still return in one piece.. I don't feel secure anymore. Balancing act, holding off the demons with a weakening grip. Feeling like the smallest push could be too much. I never meant to love so hopelessly again. It hurts, and it won't stop.. Yet life goes on and on and on.. I'd like to cancel it for lack of sufficient cause. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh Cat,...nooo!!! Please don't tell me that you are the speaker here. Ouch. So full of pain and sorrow this. It has gotten inside of me,...and is tugging at my heart. Very real. Take care C. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Cat...I can't possibly know what you are feeling...but I hurt because you hurt. And you said it all so well here...Write to me. I care...I really do. Hardrock |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I am here for you every step of the way. I know what you are enduring and I hold onto hope and faith for you, and am never more than a call away. Nicely written, but yes sad my friend..Love Ya, Deb The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks all of you for the support, it means a lot to me. So few people in the world seem to care, and here I find the greatest exceptions. Cat... |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Don't feel bad! Everything feels that way sometimes! Great poem! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Cat, we all care about you here! I hope you are OK?! This is a brilliant poem. How well you put those emotions into words! Excellent. Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I feel like this and I believe it is because I am going thru a period of change right now...sometimes life go on in a without many changes and maybe we are not necessarily happy but we are comfortable...and then a time of change arrives and we are no longer in our comfort zone and we wonder what the hell is going on...I just do the best I can...James |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Ditto James... Terrific poem Cat... great expression  |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
great work hun, *hugs* i know how hard it is tto wake up in the morning. sometimes i feel so low that i cant see the light. that i cant go on. but i have to. for some reason i am still here. after all i have been threw i should be dead. but life goes on around me while mine is still crashing down. *sigh* great work hun. Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Life goes on for a reason. Believe it or not, there is method to this unexplainable madness refered to as life. There is a reason that the sun comes up every dawn, for you, for anyone. Love, sadly comes and goes, but life remains, always foreward, relentless pushing towards tomorrow. If you dont seize life with both hands, it will pass you by. Love fails, dreams shatter, all you can do is pick up the pieces and start anew...step into the sun and leave the shadows for the true lost souls. |
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LarBear01 New Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 2 |
Cat, What a wonderfuly expressed poem. I think we all care for you and take your feelings with us. LarBear |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Wow! Very good, but very scary too! Hope You are alright...I'm here for You too. Be good to You. ~Sash~ |
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