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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
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0 posted 2000-07-18 07:25 PM



exquisite
existance


pain
pleasure


entwined
eternal

flesh
soul


       bleeding
       loving


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

© Copyright 2000 a-alibaster (H.A.R.) - All Rights Reserved
kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
1 posted 2000-07-18 07:39 PM


oh wow ali! this is great!!  this is what i strive for, i feel less is more!!  excellent work, i truly love this.  it proves for me you can't have one without the other.  just like here, no light without darkness.

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-18 10:19 PM


ali...I too liked this..it's "openness" that allows each reader to add their own perspective or fill in the blanks.  Nice work.  Hardrock
lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
3 posted 2000-07-19 05:07 AM


WoWee!
Very vampiric!
I like the format very much, with just a few words you have created a very atmospheric piece!


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

4 posted 2000-07-19 09:40 AM


I thank you all for your words of kindness.
I left the poem so open so that all could make thier own conclusion. I am glad to see that it worked as I wanted.


   lotharingia, Vampiric poetry is my specialty. It is what I have written for some time now and what I enjoy the most.  : }~


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2000-07-19 10:32 AM


This feels very sensual to me.. But then I always did love Lestat. Great piece.



"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

Portia
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 157

6 posted 2000-07-19 12:28 PM


Very, very good... so little said but so much *said.* I love vampire poetry as well.

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