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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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Engulfed in his wonder Peacefully beautiful in his slumber Exquisitely formed into sanguinarian wonder Perfectly surrounded in long wavey brown locks Tenderly held soul in the loveliest pale flesh and I gazing upon him engulfed in the existance of his precious sanguinarian wonder. "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
you, my poet friend, need to write books with that incredible imagination you have. not to mention the uncanny ability you have to make it flow the way you do. love your work!! thanks for sharing!!!!  kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~A,...this poem is so incredibly beautiful. Really. It brought on thoughts of something that I may be way off of but this is what it said to me?? an ultrasound uum,..of a baby. Anyway,...I really enjoyed this work of yours. Please excuse my need to tell you what it said to me,...that just had to come out. hehe. Take care A. *Peace. *Left field,I'm always out there.My home.  .[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
a-alibaster...Nice poem, nice read. The face in death should always evoke such emotions. Hardrock |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
PS...tried to send you an e-mail at the website address, but it came back. Send me something current and I'll forward it to you. Hardrock hardrock@innova.net |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Yum! Yum! Yummers! What a lovely picture! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
kynder, **smiles shyly** I have written books...and it is published on floppy disk form. I also have much of my works published in anthologies, ect. I am flattered that you wrote what you did of my works...I do not see that they are that good...so your words boost me up and for that I truly thank you! Spitefire, I love it when you tell me what impressions you got from my poetry...even if it is not what I was thinking when I wrote it...I LOVE to see other sides and ways to look at it. I read your thoughts and then go back and read my words as you saw them and it is always a great surprise at how well you made them into your images...Thank you for another view of my own words. I truly love looking at them through your eyes. Hardrock, your poetry is so much grander than mine and I appriciate it when you comment on mine...it means so much to me to have one that I find such a good poet like my words as well. My e-mail is affy@penn.com I think I fixed it in the profile so that it will work now. lotharingia, YMMMMM, is just what I thought when I was writting this....how did you know? : }~ BTW, I will tell all what it really was about now.....I wrote this last night as my husband was sleeping so peacefully after he came home from work....all the words were of him as he lay there. : }~ Once again, thank you all!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I have nothing profound to add. I liked this a lot. And its good to hear someone is happy. Would like to read your book sometime. Cat... |
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