navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #2 » Far from Salvaged
Dark Poetry #2
Post A Reply Post New Topic Far from Salvaged Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Jenn Cirrincione
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107
Fl

0 posted 2000-07-18 12:17 PM


I feel all alone, and empty.
The words I say meaningless, and cold.
You hate me and my life.
You wish me pain, and I understand.

I wish you'd see my point of view,
I wish you knew my hurt.
The pain I feel is continuous,
Neverending ball of regret.

Tie me up in wire,
And never set me free,
Because I feel the stabbing of your glare,
And I'm trapped here forever anyway.



[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 07-18-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer Parker - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-07-18 01:22 PM


Oh, Jenn, sorry you are feeling this bad. It's a very touching poem. Hope things are better soon.
Catalinamoon

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2000-07-18 01:23 PM


I might be able to relate to this a bit...written very honestly!!
Bridgette
Hang in there!!!!!  
< !signature-->

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 07-18-2000).]

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-07-18 04:22 PM


Jenn...despite what you may feel, you are not trapped.  There is something really good just waiting to happen for you (I really do know this...trust me).  Liked your poem...and, never regret loving.  Hardrock
Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

4 posted 2000-07-18 05:44 PM


"neverending ball of regret"
Love this line! Great poem.
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #2 » Far from Salvaged

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary