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kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-07-18 12:00 PM



She's looking for you again.
Keeps knocking at my door,
Asking where you have gone.
Says you just disappeared,
Possible you may never come home.

I try to tell this poor girl
No answers do I hold,
I'm only her reflection,
Staring back from a mirror
So cold.


*****kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

© Copyright 2000 Kynder - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-07-18 12:04 PM


Excellent Poem!!!!!!  
It leaves me so speechless!

DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-18 01:04 AM


I'm lost and I don't know where to find me.  I'm going out to look for myself.  If I should show up while I'm gone, tell me to wait till I return.  I never stare at my dog or mirrors...neither of them likes it.  Nice poem, Kyndie***  Hardock  
Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2000-07-18 09:20 AM


Very good poem...enjoyed it!!!!
Bridgette


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
4 posted 2000-07-18 09:23 AM


Excellent. One of your best. I am envious (of your brilliant poem, not the situation described   )

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


Verve
Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
5 posted 2000-07-18 01:18 PM


Dear Kynder,

Cool stuff ... *thumbs up*

verve~

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2000-07-18 01:26 PM


Kynder, I can tell you this, the same girl is in my mirror. Perfect writing, as always..



"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
7 posted 2000-07-19 10:32 PM


SisBean you do amaze me. i love this one to. but i most ask don't you wish to look at yourself your just wonderful Sis. i hope nothing is wrong with you. Love Jaybean

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
8 posted 2000-07-19 11:02 PM


Yet, some times there may even be a man staring in the mirror as well.  You speak for all of us.

jerm

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
9 posted 2000-07-20 02:40 AM


Take it from a man that has to sneek up on a glass of water to get a drink, I don't look into mirrors. They crack I crack then I dissapear.
love it kid.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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