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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Who are you? -I am me. What do you belive? -I belive in hope. Is that the truth? -Love, then. Is love truth? -I belive in myself. I can be sure I exist. What is your reality? -My reality is how others see me. What is your reality? -What I am. What are you? -I am myself. What is your reality? -Nothingness, nothingness...... Before Eve there was Lilith. From whose womb poured mankind She was cast from Eden Our mother-whore Our mother Whore Cries at the gates of the Garden Cursed are we Our hearts cry like her eyes Our souls are unfillable And bottemless as her womb Who are we to find reason in our existance When we could instead merely Be As best as possible Who am I? Who am I? Who am I? -I am myself. And that is? - I don't know. - I don't know. *************************************************** Hi! I'm back from camping! Good to see you all again! -Wren |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wren, this is phenomenal, loved it. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~What a ride!!! Wow Wren. Oustanding work. Be well. *Peace. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Welcome back Wren! Teriffic writing, loved it!!!! |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
All that fresh air must have done you some good...maybe I should go camping. No, wait, the last time I did, it was to a place called Camp Lejeune...No, no more camping for me. But it works for you...the poem was awesome. Hardrock |
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BrittH26 New Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 9florida |
loved the pome, not many people that i know, know god made lilith before he made eve. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I have been missing you (*sniff*  )and now I know why! Every one of your poems is a masterpiece. Those questions, they penetrate ... Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Thank you all, it's great to be back!  !-Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Dear Wren, Magnificent work here! I really look forward to reading more of your works! |
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