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End of the world |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
I'ts the end of the world, it's the end of your life. Time has taken all hope away from you, you'r soul left in ruins. The children gossip, your follie has been reveled to all. The old sage says even she cannot help you. Sorrow wraps it's long arms around you. Your tears runs slowly, one after another, a never ending stream of liquid pain. Stares of others burn into you eyes, their words sting like bees. All alone you sit, not a friend to be found. EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very expressive of that desolate feeling. But remember, you have lots of friends here. Take care Catalinamoon |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I agree with cat. It's a terrible, terrible feeling when you feel totally alone, and you express it very well. But who knows what tomorrow will bring? Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
You are never alone, my child...look within. See with eyes of the heart..Hardrock. |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I truely enjoyed this one! I could almost taste the darkness! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Oh...So very sad. Hope you know that You are not alone. We all care very much! Great depth and feeling. Be good to You! ~Sash~ |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Desolation abounds in this poem. Are you ok. I hope you don't really feel this alone. kethry. When dark of night takes your soul Think of me and be made whole. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Ok Im sending friendship ((hugs)) you are never alone, and although lonely is hard, there is always people who care. Deep emotions, hope our ok. I like your writing keep it up!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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