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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-07-17 01:34 AM


What if there was no love?
What if there was no more pain?
What if there was no you?
Would the world be the same?


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Dedreia
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 172
Kokomo, Indiana, United States
1 posted 2000-07-17 02:31 AM


No Way...Dee


Kyle aka Huck
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since 2000-07-16
Posts 63
Linn, MO USA
2 posted 2000-07-17 05:27 AM


It couldn't be the same, something would be missing  Without love the world would just suck

DJLI
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
3 posted 2000-07-17 07:16 AM


short and sweet and very good.

EVEN ANGELS FALL.

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2000-07-17 08:47 AM


Without love at all, I think the world would have to disintegrate. Without the pain, that would sure be nice...Without the one specific "you", I think we can all go on. But it's hard.
Great questions..



"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
5 posted 2000-07-17 09:13 AM


So well put..I think it's up to each to assess this.  This poem makes me think...and I like that.  Hardrock
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
6 posted 2000-07-17 01:18 PM


yes the questions you ask are so true. they express the things i think and ask all the time. man i'm like a three year old. LOL this is great i really enjoyed it and i hope you get your answers

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
7 posted 2000-07-17 06:30 PM


Would the world be the same?  I think not.

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
8 posted 2000-07-17 11:12 PM


This one stimulates the mind for sure!! Excellent, and Im thinking about my personal answers to this. Very good!!!!
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
9 posted 2000-07-18 09:14 AM


I really enjoy poetry like this...Loved it!!

I want to share with you one of mine...that you might enjoy!!

Is it real??
Is it not??
Does he love her??
Does he not??
Is she living in a dream??
Is she playing make believe??

Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Verve
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
10 posted 2000-07-18 01:29 PM



This really moved me ... Simple yet provocative ...

verve~

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