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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-07-16 11:39 PM


    Human Born
       But,
    Demon sent
I'm here on earth to
       Vent
   On your time
      Spent
Because the meaning
        Of life
           Has Been
              Bent



I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
1 posted 2000-07-17 12:49 PM


oh yes and twisted and crooked and all jumbled up.  excellent excellent excellent!!! way to go brobean!!  man i love reading your work!! good one!! love ya!!

sisbean


Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-07-17 08:23 AM


Hi J, good to see you. I can relate here, love the short and powerful message.
lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
3 posted 2000-07-17 12:10 PM


Excellent work as usual!!!
I love that "Human born but demon sent" and "the meaning of life has been bent" (was it ever straight?   )
What's all this stuff kynder's got with beans. Jaybean, brobean, sisbean. Two beans in a pod with Spitfire (firebean? surely not spitbean?)  
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Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland



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Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
4 posted 2000-07-17 08:27 PM


JJ...good stuff here.  "Demon sent"...whoa, talk about bad parenting.  Hardrock
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