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Face Forward and Smile
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Face Forward and Smile |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Face Forward and Smile ~~~~~ she shines on days of new digests yesterday’s pain and breathes deeply ~~~ time and again clouds of storm flood life’s floor ~~~ without shine and bruised rainbows too heavy to continue ~~~ until light blinding over new day smiles from broken one ~~~ she shines on days of new she digests yesterday’s pain and breathes deeply. ~~~~~ Face Forward and Smile. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
She does what we all must do!! Great work Spitfire!!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
A Beer A smile, big smile Let's keep it for a while Look forward, straightforward It's me your friend the LORD We'll sing and dance Spark up a little romance A beer, two beers My shoulder absorbs your tears Three beers, a fourth Bring the keg of course We'll talk we'll laugh We'll start to drink the draft Now were drunk "llett'ss cuuddllee" "SspiitFiire heelpp mmee II'mmm sseeinngg ddoouubbllee" You're holding me up "Bbutt II'mm ssupposse tooo bbee hhooldding….Hic-up!" We leave the bar You don't live too far "Heerre's aa twweentty ttaakkee tthaatt ttaxii ccarr" "Taalkke tto yya llatterr bbutt nnot too faarr" We are both home safely from the bar ___________________________________ Top it up! [This message has been edited by insect (edited 07-17-2000).] |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
once again, firebean speaks my mind!! you and i.. i swear two peas in a pod that no one knew could grow!! i love reading your work. i like this style!! excellent. you are my mirror sometimes i swear girl. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thats the best we can do, file away the pain and start fresh. Great poem, as always. Sounds like things are a bit better today. Hope so. Cat... |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I like the repetition on this one: very effective. And keep up that smile, it's the same one we all need in those bad patches! GrrreAt poem as usual! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Sounds like the smile across my face...liked this one a lot!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is just another great one from you my friend i hope to see many more before i move and miss some. enjoyed the read and Take Care. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Forward is the only way to go, and if you do it with a smile all the better. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Very good poem!!! Keep going forward thats the best we can do!!! |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
"Face forward and smile". Now, hold that pose...steady, steady. There!! Got it. Now no one will ever see the pain behind the picture. Great stuff here, SF. Hardrock |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SF, my friend, I love this one!!!!!!! She will do what needs to be done and she will be mighty!!!  Great writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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