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My Love |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States 
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My love I am happier today than I was yesterday because of you.... I spend the day thinking of the time I will be alone with you... I don't know how I lived before my life is full now because of you.... I get so excited when your name appears My heart jumps into my throat and I am overcome with emotion... I see you in every song I listen to In every love poem I read In every moment that passes... I am consumed by the desire that you have awoken in me.... It controls me night and day.... I hope I never lose touch with you... I don't think I could bear it.... I love you...my love... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, Dee, another one written just for me and my life, right?  So this sounds kind of positive, I hope you get to spend some time together.. I like the way you express your feelings, very emotional. Sandra "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I could feel the intensity of your emotions. Nicely done.  |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Dedreia...someone is very lucky to have you. Such love, such emotion...such a poem. Very enjoyable read. Hardrock |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Awwwww now that was so sweet (as I wipe a tear from my eye) Good grief why cant I get a poem like that written just for me? *sighs*! (haha) Great poem!!! Peace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
Wow. Highest praise I can give. Wow. I really felt this poem. Awesome. |
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