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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392


0 posted 2000-07-16 12:11 PM


Things...


You ask me how
I feel
and
my reply,
Every thing
You ask me how
I died
and
my reply,
All things
You ask me how
I weep
and
my reply,
Endless things...


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-07-16 04:41 PM


Beautiful and sad. Very effective.
Take care.



"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-07-16 11:05 PM


~A,...I like this things poem so much. How very neat of one. Has a directness to it...that is definately felt. Be well A. *Peace.
Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-07-17 08:37 AM


I have a tendency to write long poems...but I find my best work in the shorter ones, like this one here.  Nice job.  Hardrock
a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

4 posted 2000-07-17 09:59 AM


Thank you all for your responses. I was not sure if the poem would make an impact or not for I too am one to normally write longer poems.
UNTIL...


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

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