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It's your birthday and i love you
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It's your birthday and i love you |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio 
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hi agian yall well today is a day that i thought would be the happyest day in my life. this is my now ex-girlfriends birthday. i still do love her as this poem will show. i am gonna call her and read her this later. wish me luck. tell me what you think yall. Happy Birthday my Love Its your birthday and I love you I wish I could be with you this day But your home in virginia And I am 500 miles away All I wanna do is hold you And give you a birthday kiss Touching your sweet lips to mine Would leave me in total bliss Its your birthday and I love you I just wish I could turn back time Cuz then I would have never left you And you would still be in these arms of mine I would take you under the late night skys And play you a sweet song on my guitar Then lay with you in the cool green grass And stare at the southern stars Its your birthday and I love you I still think back to the times When your kisses took my breath away And sent shivers down my spine When we used to hold each other In that passionate embrace It made my head spin It made my little heart race Its your birthday and I love you And I know you have found another Someone that stole your heart away Like no other All I want for you is happiness And for your heart to have no more walls And if someone ever makes you cry I will be by your side before the next tear drop falls Its your birthday and I love you I just want you to know How much I really care about you And how I miss you so Its your special day hunny I wish I was with you still Its your birthday and I love you Wanda and I always will... Jesse C. Jaymz Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
p.s. i should tell yall that for my birthday she got me a card. and in it it had a poem. and it said its your birthday and i love you every few sentences. so i decided when i wrote this i would do the same. i still have that card. and i still cry when i read it. just wish i could be with her in virginia again. i miss her and love her so much. Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Jesse, again tears in my eyes. I understand well, the love that won't go away just because the person did. Are you sure she would not start over? If you love her this much, maybe it would be worth it to go to Virginia and see her. She may have another, but he may be just a substitute for you, and she is trying to protect her heart in some way. I know I could be far off base here, but again, I liken it to a similar situation in my own life, and the man and I separated, mainly beacuase I felt I needed someone more stable and more dependable. But it was never really what I wanted to do, and if he had come and asked me, I would have happily returned.Ah well, you do seem to touch my heart with your poems. Good luck with Wanda, and I will send you all my good thoughts that she is very responsive to this love you reach out to her with. Sandra |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
sandra *hugs* i touch your heart with my poems. WOW that is the best compliment i have EVER recived in my life. i wish i could give you a huge hug right now. as for wanda. i would love to go down. in fact i might but i doubt that i will ever be with her again. and that makes me so sad. i have had alot of girlfriends in the past but she was the only one i ever loved. i knew it the moment i first looked in her eyes. hey please e-mail me. i would love to talk to you. *hugs* well i am off to call her. wish me luck. thanks again sandra. i cant wait to hear from you *hugs* love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
This is one of the sweetest, most kindhearted, unselfish poems i have ever read! She is a very lucky woman to have some one like you even if you are not together. With love such as yours all things are possible!! So heartfelt your words are!! Good luck with your reading to her!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This has so lovely and sad. If you both still feel this way maybe there is a chance for the two of you. Jesse, were you the one who tried to ICQ me? If so try again, I was having computer problems. -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I would take you under the late night skies and play you a sweet song on my guitar Then lay with you in the cool green grass And stare at the southern stars." This is very romantic and tender. I hope she enjoys and appreciates you and your poetry...James [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 07-16-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Jesse, It is still saddening for me to read of your love for Wanda knowing all she has done to you etc. You are a sweetie for offering her the keys to your heart this one last time. I hope I hope and pray she responds in kind, but if she doesn't as I fear she won't again I will be here for you, you know that in your heart I hope. *hugs* I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
thanks yall. i did call her. she said she liked it. right at the end i cried and lost it. lord do i miss her. i am a true romantic at heart. i had everything perfect. before I knew she found someone new, i planned on going down there to surprize her. see her son is in australia and she had to pick him up today. so i was gonna be there waiting on her doorstep with roses and an engagment ring. sadly it never came to pass and i am sitting here alone on a comp. it seems that everytime i try in love i get kicked right between the legs. its hard for me to give my heart out and when i do i give it to them full force. and right now i am so afriad to give it to anyone. well i should stop babbling on before my reply is longer then my poem =) THANK YALL SOOOOOOO MUCH. i love all your feedback and it makes me feel so loved. thank you all. *hugs* Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Jesse...I truly hope you find the love of your life, whether it be with Wanda or some other. You have a lot to give. Peace Brother. Hardrock |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
thanks hardrock. i do have alot of love to give. to much mabey. i hope i find someone to love soon. i am so lonley. my guitar is great but i cant have my guitar snuggle me  thanks my friendOnce upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh Jesse, I hope your dreams of being together again come true!!! I always wish for a happy heart!!!! Your poem to her was beautiful and overflowed with love!!! I'll keep my fingers and toes crossed for you!!!! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is sweet..and a very lovely poem!! I hope it all works out for you!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
i hope my love life works out too. i am such a romantic with so much to give. as you can see by my work i love this girl so much. and i hope to make it back to her and in my heart i know i will. just so sad right now. but reading all of this helps so much. *hugs* thanks. and Deborah1, cross your toes for me?? i got to see that trick. heheeheh thanks that made me laugh just thing of you crossing your toes. hehehe thanks hun *hugs* Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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BrittH26 New Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 9florida |
Jesse, I just want to say dont be afraid to love again when me and my husband of 9 years got divorced i thought i was gonna die all i wanted to do was lock my self away and get drunk, for 2 years i stayed like that untill i met anthony it took a long time for him to get through to me i would jump when he tried to touch me and i hardly ever talked i didnt want him to get to know me, but guess what that very same man finally broke through to my heart and soul we've been married a little over 2 years and im 3 months pregnant with his child and he treats my other 2 kids just like his own, they call him daddy my ex has not seen them in 4 years. the pome was beautiful you will make some lady very happy. Britt |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
britt thats how she was with me. she didnt let me to get to know her till it was time for me to leave. she always tried to keep me at arms lenth. meanwhile i totaly opened up to her. i told her that i was the only one that would never hurt her, beat her, or cheat on her. and she always had guys cheating on her. and what happened? she cheated on me. *cries* i got to go. thanks britt. Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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