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Life passing me by... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Life is passing me by As I just sit here and sigh Wanting to see some light For nothing is in my sight I am so different from the rest Yet I work so hard at doing my best I want so badly to fit in Yet my heart tells me I have too many sins My darkness scares them all away They run and hide from day to day They turn their back and dont care The loneliness is too much to bare Life is passing me by As i just sit here and sigh Eck not my best, but I needed to vent a little  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Not your best- but still speaks well. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A familiar feeling, siting on the sideline watching everything pass you by. Vent away God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
DKW, what do you mean when you refer to your too many sins? Nobody is perfect! Maybe you are trying too hard to fit in? Perhaps you should just accept yourself as you are? From what I can see, you seem to be a lovely, caring and talented person, what more can anyone expect from you? Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Venting is what I do best I like this, its very meaningful to me.Catalinamoon |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DkW..I know the feeling of life just passing you by. But, sometimes it hurts when you play in the traffic...so you learn. Nice venting...Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
do say this is not one of your best i think it is. it has a great flow and rhyme. and i enjoyed it very much and i think most of are poems we all write are venting how we feel so this just has to be great don't you think? when i'm writing i'm just venting how i feel and to express myself even though i am different and look at the world that way to. Take Care I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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