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demoninlove
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Dehradun

0 posted 2000-07-15 03:15 PM


HER NAME IS ALSO - WOMAN

She is the power that sustains life on earth
Her name is Faith
She is the person to whom all look for strength
Her name is Truth
She is the breeze that cools fevered brows
Her name is Love
She is the light that guides the paths of men
Her name is Constancy
She is the pillar on whom all men lean
Her name is Wife
She is the silent giant cradeling the world
Her name is Mother
She is the water that washes away all fears
Her name is Temptation
She is the wisdom of the ages come to save all
Her name is Teacher
She is the fire which spurs men to strive
Her name is Ambition
She is the sword that frees men from slavery
Her name is Mistress
She is the mystery which no man can solve
Her name is Enigma

All these names she has.

She also goes by another name.....

"Woman".

Deepak Menon



© Copyright 2000 Deepak Menon - All Rights Reserved
Rex
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas
1 posted 2000-07-15 03:29 PM


Superb Deepak, just superb.  How right you are!  Just another fine example of your wonderful poetry.

Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.

-William Wordsworth-

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-07-15 03:54 PM


Wow, this sounded almost biblical. And how great that you have the awareness of how wonderful we women are.  
Superb writing as usual..

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
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Blue Heaven
3 posted 2000-07-16 12:58 PM


She is the words that give life to our poems.
She is the poet that gives hope to our lives.


Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
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saarbruecken, Germany
4 posted 2000-07-16 06:06 AM


Yes, this is truly brilliant. Women's creative power and her role as mother and muse have inspired men throughout the centuries. You express this admiration perfectly here.
On the subject of constancy I have to add my favourite quote about this: “Nothing is more constant than inconstancy itself” said by Baldanders in Grimmelshausen’s Simplicius Simplicissimus.  


Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

5 posted 2000-07-16 12:23 PM


I am awestricken.....This is wonderful and , by me at least, so appriciated!! Seems that most of the time we/ women are seen as nothing more than objects, it is wonderful to see that there are some who see us as so much more!!!
For this I thank you. I will make it a point to have my husband read this...for he too is one that sees women as so much more and I know he will too appriciate your words!!


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

glidingdove
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since 2000-07-16
Posts 13

6 posted 2000-07-17 01:19 AM


That is another facet of Deepak!


demoninlove
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Posts 211
Dehradun
7 posted 2000-07-18 10:56 AM


Thank you all for your comments - In fact one can write volumes about women - and by volumes I mean volumes of wonderful things, and if I resisted the temptation to go amok in their praise - it was because even volumes would be as insufficient as this little poem.
Bows to all the wonderful women who make this planet a place fitting for us to live in!
Deepak


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