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FJiznit
Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 24


0 posted 2000-07-15 03:05 PM


What will it take to make you hate me?
Hmmm.  Let me see...

All you've built, I'll bring crashing down
You may stand tall, but I'll cut you down
I'll steal your love and break your heart
Set about tearing your world apart

Gonna taint your name and poison your blood
Make your life a lie in a hole of mistrust
Take all that you have and burn it away
Smite your face of love with my fist of hate

Damn right I'm a *******
All I do is wrong
Watch me ruin your life
Then hate me...  That's what I want...

I'll make you taste my insane lust
Grind you down 'til you taste the dust
A whole world of pain rising up for you
So I'll open the door and push you through

Damn right I'm a *******
All I do is wrong
Watch me ruin your life
Then hate me...  That's what I want...

Take my hand of friendship, the hand of an enemy
I don't care what you think of me
It's my ambition to bring you down
I wont rest 'til I steal your crown

Damn right I'm a *******
All I do is wrong
Watch me ruin your life
Then hate me...  That's what I want...

Hate makes me what I am...


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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-07-15 04:02 PM


Hmm, that was a little bit hostile...Tell me, are you referring to a specific entity, which is hate, or are you trying to make something or someone hate you. I notice I'm a little dense today, too bad I was the first response. I liked the poem very much, and the feeling it conveyed to me, was more of someone trying very hard to turn someone away. Powerful writing, either way..
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-07-15 04:10 PM


~Uh,...powerful writing indeed. Lots of strength behind these well written words. Lots of direction and opposition too. Be well. *Peace.
DeathTrippy
Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45
WY USA
3 posted 2000-07-15 04:35 PM


Interesting view.  Powerful revultion at work here.  Guess I'm not the only anti-social here.  Is this directed at somebody in particular or at the world?
FJiznit
Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 24

4 posted 2000-07-15 06:38 PM


LOL.  This ain't about me.  Maybe I've been listening to too much Nick Cave.  Heh heh.
lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
5 posted 2000-07-15 07:03 PM


What an unpleasant person you have written about here. I like to write about that type too   . Can't say it reminded me much of Nick Cave though, sorry, but I know what you mean. Didn't Johnny Thunders have a (somewhat weedy) song of this title?

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
6 posted 2000-07-16 12:14 PM


Good Grief!! Make me have nightmares now  .  This was like ... ummmmm FREAKY!   Nice flow tho my friend!!  Geesh what happened to them love poems!?!?  (haha)
Nice to see ya again too.  Missed chatting with ya  

Peace
DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
7 posted 2000-07-17 07:45 PM


Whatever happened to "just say no"?  Nice poem...lots of hostility here.  Sometimes some people just won't accept "No" for an answer....more extreme measures are called for.  But...I dunno...I couldn't do that.  Hardrock
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