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Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-07-15 11:11 AM


Looking into ur eyes
Once again I see
The turning of my life
And the smiles meant to be
Laughter fills the air
Joy takes  control
Feeling the beauty
Deep within my soul
Watching the sunrise
And the sunset each day
At times I feel speechless
With such little to say
But how do I open up
And say how I feel
Pain within my heart
Is such a constent deal
So each day shall pass
With silence in the air
Knowing I may miss it
Is something I must bare


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


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Rex
Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas
1 posted 2000-07-15 12:39 PM


Lovely DKW, enjoyed it very much.

Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.

-William Wordsworth-

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-15 12:51 PM


DkW...you only go 'round once in life...so grab for it.  Well said...Hardrock
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-07-15 04:10 PM


OK, DKW, I got this one big time. I try so hard to not let past pain ruin who I am today, and usually it works. Not always. I think its always better to go for it htough, don't let anything pass by that you really want, if you can help it. Great poem..
Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
4 posted 2000-07-15 10:52 PM


peace in mind? Hard to keep out doubt!
   Good write. Thanks!

Click



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