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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States 
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Somehow, Someway, Someday... We are destined to be together, Even if only for one night of sweet never ending passion... Oh my love, How you consume me... My mind, My heart, My desire... My every thought of you makes me weak. I have no control of the feelings you have aroused in me... It seems a minute doesn't pass without a thought of you in it... This is all so overwhelming... I feel so much passion for you... It's all I breathe for, All powerful, All I live for...to touch you... [This message has been edited by Dedreia (edited 07-16-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Dedreia, great poem. Welcome to Passions. I hope you have your night with this lover, I am in the same space, its amazing how thoughts of someone can overwhelm you constantly, especially, it seems, if you cannot have him. Good luck Catalinamoon "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Your words read with such feeling. " Somehow, Someway, Someday...",...I truly hope. Be well. *Peace. *BTW,...Welcome!!! [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Nice poem Dedreia, and welcome to Passions. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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BrittH26 New Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 9florida |
I thought your pome was beautiful,it made me remember a time when i was in love with my ex-husbands bestfriend.It was very forbidden but i could'nt help myself. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
WELCOME to Dark Passions!  And one hell of a first post. Boy oh boy do I remember these feelings you have captured here. Very well done!Peace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Powerful, a great first post. Welcome! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Dedreia...I had to go check my e-mail because I received nearly identical words from the wife of a friend. Hoo Boy...this is going to be a "sticky wicket". Didn't know anyone else like that was out there. Hardrock |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome!!!  Why does the forbidden fruit seem so much sweeter?????? This was a wonderful journey showing the yearning we all feel for one forbidden sometime in our lives.. Great work! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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