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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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How unreasonable is it to feel nostalgia for something I never wanted, and still don't? How absurd it is to walk down memory lane and watch the path grow far more appealing than it ever was in reality? How depressing is it to see that someone did so much better without you? |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
you said it girl. and unfair too. unkind, unthoughtful, unneeded. and don't you grow tired of everyone saying oh it is their loss, you are sooooo much better... yeah whatever. excellent work here!! i am angry at this person who has just disregarded you!!! you bring it out, hard to do!!! good one, moonbeam!! love ya!! kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Honestly Written Ms Moon! Deepak |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
You have captured My feelings with words that I could never express...Deeply touching and very well written. My vote! |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
You GO Girl!!!  I have asked myself the same question. Is it that they do so much better or is it that we havent really tried YET? Hmmmmm such an open question it is.  Great Poem BTW Peace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
How depressing is it to see that someone did so much better without you? i love this one.. great work, catalinamoon. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Oh yes! How good you are at capturing these feelings in your work! If only we could understand the absurdities of our mind! And indeed how depressing it is to see that someone did better without us, especially when that someone is someone we loved! Great, great piece! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Uum,...about 6 replies ago I could have come up with something original to say about your poem,...but all of our friends have said it so well. ~"you bring it out" -K. ~"Honestly Written" -D. ~"Deeply touching" -S. ~"such an open question" -DkW. ~"great work" -M. ~"How good you are at capturing these feelings in your work!" -L. *Aren't they the best for saying all that I feel? hehe. Cat,...you really know how to write 'em. Take care you. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Cat...maybe he's doing better without you..maybe he isn't. He surely wouldn't tell you if he wasn't. Besides..your lives took different roads. You are probably better off without him. Nice read. Hardrock |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Cat, How do you do it? Sums up this in very few lines. I love to read your stuff. I hope to learn from your writings. Great job. LarBear |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
Sigh... very well expressed. It's funny how some things, no matter how unreasonable, don't stop being true because of that! |
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DeathTrippy Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45WY USA |
Hard to say who's better off... the mind seems to come up with the most confusing, depressing, and absurd sentiments sometimes. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
He is just doing better with his life,,,but not because your not there. Its how things turned out, and thats it. But this was a wonderful expression of those feelings and the second-guesses we all have. Great Job!!! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Yes hon it wasn't meant to be!! None of what you ask is wrong, in fact, it's so well expressed!!  It's funny if you look at it clinically where those sort of thoughts can lead, I know, I've wandered there a few times myself too!! Great work hon I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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