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Blind Lust |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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Visions play, roll, cavort in my head. Pretend I smell you lingering in my bed. Lust weighs me down like hot Consuming Lead. Snippets of words tantalizingly said... ...how I love those toenails red. To your door, a path I begin to tread. Knowing my need will be so gently fed. Ignoring the ditch I am digging instead. There is no use loving a heart that is dead. *****kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm, I was trying to pick out a specific line, but Damn it, they all apply!! Have I ever been there. Still visiting there regularly in fact.. As always, love your work. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Hey, Kynder, the beginning of this one made me think I was in love! And then the anticlimax: There is no use loving a heart that is dead. Excellent work!!! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Wow! Only love is blind,lust is all sensory.....powerful. well done! Thanx!! I know this feeling. Click |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Kynder, full of the passion, and the loss, that we all feel. . . Superb. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Kynder...powerful!! I posted my poem, "Sensory Deprivation", then read Click's response to this one. They fit. Like Cat..been there, done that. Hardrock |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
kynder, you sum up that emotion perfectly beautifully written. "Out of sorrow entire worlds have been built Out of longing great wonders have been willed They're only little tears, darling, let them spill" Nick |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well SIS love your work as always but, i must say this stuff is not as dark as it use to be are you smiling? i hope so and keep it up and get a little happier cause i'm here to make you laugh. Love JayBean I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Been there too my friend. Know it well. Superb writing and thoughts in this one. As for the emails try writing me again hon, I'd love to get to know you more...  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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