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Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA

0 posted 2000-07-14 10:22 PM




Look! What do you see?

Listen! What do you hear?

Think! What do you feel?

You should have been 1 year old,
today, and Mom and Dad miss you!!

We never got to meet you,
but we love you anyhow.

What color would your eyes be?

You would be walking and talking,
But we miss you!!

What would your laugh sound like?

We miss you, But God knows you!!


   All our Love!!
                Dad & Mom

One from  archives!!(5-13-00)

I have not posted one from my personal stuff till now!


Click



© Copyright 2000 Click - All Rights Reserved
sash
Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

1 posted 2000-07-14 10:31 PM


Click,
I am so sorry for Your loss. i have posted one of my own titled Logan.
Sleeping sweetly, our small ones in Gods hands.

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-07-14 10:47 PM


Click, what a sad poem. So sorry that you can't have your little one with you. Take care.
Sandra

insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

3 posted 2000-07-14 10:54 PM


Very sad!
Voted

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
4 posted 2000-07-14 11:45 PM


what a hard one to write, i would think.  i am so glad to see you opening up with us.  good to see that personal stuff.  very good, full of the emotion that must be bittersweet.  

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
5 posted 2000-07-15 12:47 PM


Awwwwww I feel your pain my friend!  excellent poem also.  Hope all is better!

Peace


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
6 posted 2000-07-15 05:40 AM


What a terrible tragedy! There is so much feeling here. Why is everyone making me cry with their poems nowadays?
*sniff*


Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


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