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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-07-14 08:35 PM


DEATH

Why do people,
all eventually die?
How does God choose?
Does he wanna see us cry?

Death is a mystery,
we all want to know.
When people die,
where do they go?

Heaven or Hell?
A place far away?
Soon we'll all know,
somewhere, someday.

Is it beautiful there?
Can you fun all day?
Can you look down on the world,
& watch them play?

We all wanna know,
but not today.
We'll all get our answer,
somehow, someway!

*Few Will cry, when I finally die!*

LOVE ELMO



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insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

1 posted 2000-07-14 09:30 PM


Hard questions to answer.
For now we can live for today
and try to prepare for tomorrow.
Nice poem!

qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2000-07-15 09:46 AM


THANX INSECT   LOVE ELMO <3
baerlon
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
3 posted 2000-07-15 12:34 PM


Death is a marksman sitting and waiting for when the time is right.  Sometimes he get trigger happy, but alas nothing we can do about it.  This is really good.  I look foward to seeing more from you.



There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

DeathTrippy
Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45
WY USA
4 posted 2000-07-15 04:43 PM


Who can say the exact state of heaven or heck.  If any person can exactly define them then they are better than I.  Powerrful questions with answers too complex for comprehension.  Very well done.
qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
5 posted 2000-07-16 04:14 PM


Awww thanx every1 LOVE ELMO
       =O      

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