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A day's work |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Causes Temptation runs amok smudging the image, Hate has obscured the saviors underneath its foot, Hope has altered into a mirage and nothing more, Soiled with self-love, the souls are mislaid, Solutions Wiping the glass of guilt, Scrubbing the floorboards of hate, Cleaning the skylight of sadness Washing the grime of selfishness, Effects Light of heaven strikes the gleaming glass, Faces of angels now can be made out in the floor, God gestures at me now through the porthole, Loosening of the muck brings forth the truth. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I like how the title just sums it up,...gosh though, so much in here. This poem holds a heavy load. I like the way it takes you through it. Well written. *Peace. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i find this poem just like God. 3 parts in one... the Father the Son and the Holy Spirit. the cause the solution the end. absolutely divine this poem. He is so very good. thank you for spreading His light.  kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Well I wanted to try writing it in a different style you know what I mean. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very striking these words you have written..James |
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