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meara
Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 15


0 posted 2000-07-14 09:21 AM


To afraid to love you
To afraid to let you go
Surrounded in pain
Either way love goes
My thoughts surround
You through and through
My heart aches
For you everyday more
My ever enduring love


© Copyright 2000 Lisa Ritchey - All Rights Reserved
lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
1 posted 2000-07-14 09:52 AM


What a conflict you describe here! So many fears! Very well expressed. I hope it isn't about you, though!!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


LarBear
Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138
Kingston, New York
2 posted 2000-07-14 01:43 PM


Believe Me Darlin`

I have been there. Egggg What a feeling you get in your stomach.
Damb if you do and damb if you dont. Eather way love is too blame.

Good Poem

LarBear

Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
3 posted 2000-07-14 01:50 PM


Welcome to Passions!


Thank you for sharing with us! Please look around and make yourself comfortable! There are many good poets 'round here!

Christopher

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-07-14 11:40 PM


~Welcome here!!!  .  Oh to be there....between a rock and a hard place. Ouch. Great writing. Take care. *Peace.
moshpit
Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
5 posted 2000-07-15 06:26 AM


sometimes falling in love is indeed a very frightening experience but it's also a very meaningful one.. welcome to the forums, meara.

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
6 posted 2000-07-15 07:34 AM


Hi, welcome from me too! Nice interpretation of the conflict. I always go with loving him anyway, though I generally get hurt. Cause if there is pain no matter what, go fo the good stuff.  



"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
7 posted 2000-07-15 11:14 PM


Meara,
Hey Girlie I wish I could do it for you.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

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