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0 posted 2000-07-14 01:52 AM


Quenching my thirst with a sip of heaven,
Igniting my fire with the flames of hell,

Stirring the untouched at the launch of my existence,
Seeing it all at the closing stage of my life,

Reality flutters through mirages,
Cold iron of truth steams the wrinkles of lies,
Pulse of love feels my unfilled spirit,
Fluid images liberates my mind,

Unification with the earth I welcome,
I acknowledge the imminent of my ending,
So that new being can be brought at this time.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Deborah1
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1 posted 2000-07-14 07:55 AM


Quenching my thirst
With a sip of heaven....loved that verse. I enjoyed the whole read, very well done!!!!

Xeonox
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2 posted 2000-08-26 02:30 AM


Thanks for replying Deborah1.  

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

kynder
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3 posted 2000-08-26 09:54 PM


what a rebirth of the essence of you.  this is exquisite!! cold iron of truth steams the wrinkle of lies........ wow!!!!!!! that is so powerful!! so good!!

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

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