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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
why do we try to echo life play god move dolls around to mimic our existence in philosophical tea partys what is this manipulation about? He created man in His own image look at how we move so lacking grace like crude playthings some of us sit on the shelf and wait for hands pull us down dust us off for strings to be pulled can we come to terms with the truth behind our own existance? do our porcelain faces betray us or is fear lost in our glass eyes? *********************************** Hey everyone- I'm going camping for a few days, so if you don't hear from me, thats why!  Wren |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~First,...this was post 123 at 11:11. Wow. How cool. ~This observation is incredible. My goodness,...an eye opener for sure. Hey,...have an awesome time camping, I hike lots and love it,..have fun out there. *Peace. |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
I agree...a wonderful eye opener. you put this in a interesting light. EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Wren ,this is interesting thought-provoking stuff...we dont even come to terms with ourselves easily yet we still want to brag about what we think we know about ourselves in front of others...am i correct? enjoy the last two lines muchly..to this reader, it hints that we are afraid to come to terms with ourselves |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Yes it can be hard to look in our own eyes... very interesting points made, I enjoyed the poem! Have a great time camping!! See you when you return |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Now this one got me thinking ... How can we try to create, to play "God" without fathoming the mysteries of the universe? That's what I read in it. Have fun, although I'm sure you're already gone now! I will miss your poems *sniff* Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very interesting, raises good issues. Have fun on your trip hurry back! "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Wren..I agree, very thought provoking stuff. Enjoyed it. Hardrock |
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