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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-07-13 07:08 PM


A weak heart is
Almost loosing the soul-
Mostly evil
Black as coal

A soft heart is
Almost gentle to touch-
Mostly Good
Pure and white

Leaving me speachless

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

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Junior Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 26
San Diego, Ca.
1 posted 2000-07-13 08:46 PM


Very somber but I like it.  Dark feelings always interest me.
a_little_girl
Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
2 posted 2000-07-13 09:17 PM


The two different kinds of hearts. Hmmm, interesting.
--the little one

Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

3 posted 2000-07-13 10:37 PM


This poem is short, sweet, and well written. Good job! Keep it up!
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

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