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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-07-13 07:05 PM


Every minute I am around you
I feel free to be me


But when I am with the one I love
I wish I was with you

YOu take me serious
So careful about my soul
Making sure I don't brake

Why can you care
More than everyone combined
And you are just now
Starting as my friend

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-07-13 09:06 PM


Neala, that is a potent question. It does seem to me that our friends sometimes care more than our lovers. Sad situation.  Lovely poem.



"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy

meara
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 15

2 posted 2000-07-14 09:26 AM


I may not have much of a position to say anything about love at the momment, but I think that you should just go where your heart is leading you.
Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
3 posted 2000-07-15 11:12 PM


Hey,
Thanks I am gladd you can relate.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

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