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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2000-07-13 06:21 PM


BETRAYAL

A love I thought would last forever.
A guy I thought had loved me too.
A friend always stuck between us.
A game of revenge they played on me.

She wanted to have my fun.
He wanted to get me back.
She wanted me to feel her hurt,
she doesn't know the damage done,
because I'm now feeling worse.

It's changed our friendship forever,
the way I look at her now.
I know she can't be trusted.
I don't deserve this from my best friend.

Did it all for a little revenge,
but she ruined it forever.
Over jealousy of my happiness,
& all because of some guy.

She thinks things are back to normal,
but we are far from that.
My wounds have'nt yet healed,
& probably never will.

As soon as she sees me smile again,
she pours more salt on the burn.
Uncovering my healing cuts,
revealintg my buried pain.

Nothing will ever be the same,
'cause of games she likes to play.
The fun she gets from me,
isn't the kind friends should share.

The lies & jokes were always there,
she thought I never caught on.
The bottled pain I kept inside,
the type that really hurts.

The game of reversing her pain,
from her bleeding heart to mine.
Wiping away her speck of hurt,
& magnifying it into me.

When she'd feel a pinch,
she'd spin the wheel around,
so I would ache instead.
I'm tired of playing her game,
tired of feeling her hurt,
but what am I left to do?

*You can trust your TRUE friends on 1 hand & still have fingers left over*

LOVE ELMO
<3

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Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-13 06:28 PM


Elmo...someone once said that you should consider yourself lucky to have five true friends in a lifetime.  You still got fingers left...give the ex-friend the middle one and go find some TRUE friends.  Nice expression of your pain here.  Hardrock
qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
2 posted 2000-07-13 06:34 PM


LOL Thanx Hardrock  
**STAR**
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 26
San Diego, Ca.
3 posted 2000-07-13 08:15 PM


It is very touching.  I had a friend do the same thing to me.  I look back at it and he did me a favor.  In time you'll look back and I hope she did you a favor to.  Hang in there.
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