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Rex
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-07-13 02:06 PM


Last night your voice
Was on the wind...
And close, with trembling hands,
I held the shutters fast
Lest they blow wide
And sweep my soul away!



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since 2000-07-10
Posts 26
San Diego, Ca.
1 posted 2000-07-13 08:31 PM


Nice.  Short but it has a lot of meaning.
catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-07-13 09:10 PM


Rex, this was so beautifully worded, and so true. Love it.
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-07-13 09:46 PM


Lovely so few words, yet speaks volumes..
And what can you do when you hear their voice on the wind, embrace it or hide from it..
Great stuff!!  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


a_little_girl
Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
4 posted 2000-07-13 10:04 PM


The love shown in here is unbelievable. Its rather personal, but I know what you feel.
--the little one

Wren
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

5 posted 2000-07-13 10:23 PM


Ohmygod. Wow!!!!!! I love the image and the emotions being expressed here! Wow! Fear of being swept away.....Wow! I was compleatly awed by this!
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

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