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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-07-13 07:42 AM




(just a little digression, for fun..)


Sex soup-Simply delicious when cooked with the right ingredients..

Instructions:  Bring to a strong boil, add your choice of seasoning,(see below) simmer and serve.

Cooked with true love, it is spiritually sublime.
You will be satiated.

Mixed with sincere affection, it is sizzling and spicy.

Blended with caring, it is succulent and savory.

Combined with someone you used to love, it is sardonic and slightly sour.

Stirred up with a friend, it can be satisfyingly filling.

Chilled with an empty relationship, it is cold and satiric.

Forced to partake, it will make you sick.

Heated up simply because of hunger, it is sinfully sweeet,
but will leave you starving..

Soup's on.....



[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 07-13-2000).]

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Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-13 07:44 AM


Set out a bowl for me...I'll be right there. I'm starving!!  Thanks for making my day...I needed that.  Hardrock
Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
2 posted 2000-07-13 07:46 AM


Ohhhh Yes!!!! This is better than Betty Crocker my friend...I don't cook but thats a recipe I understand!!! Very very well done!!!!!! Your mind has created a masterpiece here!!! Love this!!
allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
3 posted 2000-07-13 02:41 PM


Delicious!

Allan

Rex
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas
4 posted 2000-07-13 02:43 PM


Great one Catalinamoon....but don't forget...simmer for an hour or more before serving and it will be EXPLOSIVE!

Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.

-William Wordsworth-

kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
5 posted 2000-07-13 05:08 PM


one heck of an imagination you got there, chickie poo!!  and to add to rex's advice, i would slow roast it for like 5 hours!!!      makes it that much more tender!!!! hee hee
  loved this one!!!!  is it just me or are you getting better at this by the day???

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2000-07-13 05:14 PM


Now, after trying a bowl, I'm really partial to that sizzly and spicy flavor.  Us old coonasses really like that hot stuff.  Gets the body just a sweatin'.  Mmmmm-mmmmm GOOD!

jwesley

**STAR**
Junior Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 26
San Diego, Ca.
7 posted 2000-07-13 08:08 PM


I like this.  You have very deep passion in you don't you?  Save a bowl for me.
Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

8 posted 2000-07-13 10:48 PM


I hope it's made with vegtable broth, becase I'm vegetarian. Your sense of humor is fantastic!  
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

AniKay83
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since 2000-06-28
Posts 388
Missing Since 1999
9 posted 2000-07-13 11:07 PM


Cambell's ain't got nothin' on you, hun! *stomach growls* Heh, heh....

"I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel."
~Touch and Go



sash
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

10 posted 2000-07-13 11:19 PM


WOW!!! Healthy Request move over!
Great fun in that one! Thanks.

lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
11 posted 2000-07-14 09:56 AM


Now this one is really clever! I feel refreshed!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland


LarBear
Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138
Kingston, New York
12 posted 2000-07-14 01:16 PM


Cat,

What a nice thing. I sure wish I could order that meal. But what is exactly for desert?

LarBear

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
13 posted 2000-07-14 06:27 PM


Can I have some more please, a delicious poem, I am licking my lips in joy.    

"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers.

Portia
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 157

14 posted 2000-07-14 07:54 PM


Excellent! This was perfect for a little diversion. I love the twists in there ("sardonic and slightly sour," and "it will make you sick"). Grin you know you've done well when your fellow poets have to clickthe *link* to review the post rather than scrolling down  
insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

15 posted 2000-07-14 08:44 PM


I'm starving
This hunger digs at my body like a carving
Always returning like a loop
I would love some of your soup

Thank you  

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