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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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THE DOOR Every night & every day, not dreams, but visions, drift through my head. They are fuzzy, never very clear. But within, floats a door. Only I hold the key, to my roadway of secrets. I unlock my door, & unleash the secret me. Maybe someday, the world will know, why I laugh, & cry, & why I keep my door, locked so tight. *SOMEDAY YOU WILL SEE, WHO I REALLY WANNA BE* LOVE ELMO <3 |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~That little you seems like it's aching to get out. Unlock, unlock,...it's not so good to keep all inside,...Joel tells me that it'll eat you. Really...touching poem. *Peace. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I agree with spitfire, hon, you have to unlock. Its ok, lots of people will understand and care about the real you. I could feel the emotion in the poem. Take care |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Elmo..I understand the door analogy very well. We all have doors....and some things are best kept under lock and key. But not with you....open that door and let us all bask in the brightness within. Hardrock |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx every1 i know i'm working on being more open about some things but others are to dark to let free  LOVE ELMO <3 |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well written poem.. I understand completely... had been there If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this is a poem that i can identify with,being an introvert myself though i am glad that you are slowly revealing more of yourself to others...moi always trying to do that too well,keep writing,qtpieelmo, writing helps to release our pent-up emotions |
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