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Dark Enchantress
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meet Morgana


0 posted 07-12-2000 02:17 PM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

I couldn't help but notice
that disapproving look on your face
as I told you
what I let him do to me
And you asked what I felt for him
But when I told you simply, "nothing"
You didn't look surprised,
instead you didn't understand
I said, "Lust and need
are two killers for me,
not to mention
he was good with his hands."
But oh how I hated knowing
I was loved
only for my tits and ass,
although still craving
the taste of affection
You still don't know
and I hope you never do
As to why the girl with so many
is left so alone

Note: This was a reflecting moment....I'm not like this anymore. lol As unpleasent as it may be I don't like ignoring truth and I like looking at the past to see how far we've come so I'm sorry if I offended anybody in any way.


I wish you could hear
the child that cries
in my flesh and makes
my bones ache
-Jewel

~*Angel of Darkness*~


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allan
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since 04-09-2000
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1 posted 07-12-2000 02:38 PM       View Profile for allan   Email allan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit allan's Home Page   View IP for allan

Well done for telling it like it is. It's tough for men to hear from women what they so easily do and say themselves.

Men are SO hypocritical about this kind of situation, they justify it easily when it's them, if a woman does it she's a slut - that's so much crap! Men, wake up to yourselves!

This poem was great - keep on telling it straight!

Allan
Jamie
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since 06-26-2000
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Blue Heaven


2 posted 07-12-2000 02:57 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

Call me "allstate".
On the serious side-- reflection is good for the soul they say, so yours should be much better now.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Dark Enchantress
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3 posted 07-12-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

Thank you Allan & Prometheus!  

I wish you could hear
the child that cries
in my flesh and makes
my bones ache
-Jewel

~*Angel of Darkness*~


Wren
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4 posted 07-12-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for Wren   Email Wren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wren

That poem hit a nerve with me.....I enjoyed reading it! You made quite a point, too. So often people confuse sex with affection! Great work!
-Wren



The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme
firejerm
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Springfield, OH, good ol USA


5 posted 07-12-2000 09:36 PM       View Profile for firejerm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for firejerm

Personally I think the first reply was kind of kiss ass.  There are just as many women who would have difficulty hearing this from men, as men would from women.  I have been on that receiving end.  This is great work.  A little angry, a little needed!  I hope to read more from you soon!!!!!

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe
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The Shores of Alone


6 posted 07-12-2000 10:16 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

Wow, very soul baring, and you know what? I think all  or darn close to all woman have had these experiences. I can see from the poem, that when you say you felt nothing you didn't actually feel nothing. You felt sad that you were not being loved. And even though things can be casual, it also hurts when you are discounted.  Good for you if you have gotten stronger now.



"If a man moves you to feel like a woman,
the least you can do is let him."
Merrit Malloy
kynder
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7 posted 07-12-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for kynder   Email kynder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kynder

this is excellent excellent work.  thank you for this.  i wish every last one of my dancer friends could read this.  i have been there so many times my damn self girl.  a smart, eloquent slut is even worse.  they really can't stand that.  

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman
Hardrock
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8 posted 07-13-2000 01:03 AM       View Profile for Hardrock   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Hardrock

God, how I hate that word....but I loved the poem.  As long as you feel, as long as you know, as long as you understand...you are not a slut.  Temporarily promiscuous?  Maybe.  But sluts don't write like you do.  Hardrock
lotharingia
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9 posted 07-13-2000 05:33 AM       View Profile for lotharingia   Email lotharingia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit lotharingia's Home Page   View IP for lotharingia

I think you express very well a feeling many people have when they jump from one lover to the other. Longing for love inside we pretend we are just doing it for fun. These are revealing words indeed:
You still don't know
and I hope you never do
As to why the girl with so many
is left so alone
Great work!


Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Deborah1
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10 posted 07-13-2000 07:17 AM       View Profile for Deborah1   Email Deborah1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deborah1

Well you did not offend me at all. I think (hope) I am open to how someone expresses themselves. Promiscuity comes with reason..I enjoy your poems and think its always a good thing to express our feelings!
qtpieelmo
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY


11 posted 07-13-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for qtpieelmo   Email qtpieelmo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for qtpieelmo

Wow great poem. I was the same way a few years ago & I'm paying for it now. My boyfriend (1 year & a month) doesnt trust me as far as he can throw me! I love him more than everything & could never hurt him like that I've been hurt too much to do it to some1 i truly love but anyway enough about my great life   great poem!!
**STAR**
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12 posted 07-13-2000 08:27 PM       View Profile for **STAR**   Email **STAR**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for **STAR**

I like it.  You are telling it like it is.  I have never looked at it that way.  I have always never thought why a woman does what she does.  The old male way of looking at things is hard to get past.   Thank you.
a_little_girl
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13 posted 07-13-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for a_little_girl   Email a_little_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit a_little_girl's Home Page   View IP for a_little_girl

Nice definition of a slut!      
--the little one
Broken
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since 03-12-2000
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The woods


14 posted 07-16-2000 09:12 AM       View Profile for Broken   Email Broken   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Broken

*******
But oh how I hated knowing
I was loved
only for my tits and ass,
*******
If you're refering to yourself here I'd just like you to know, I love you for all other reasons than this.
I really enjoyed reading this one, mostly because you told it straight out how you felt.
I've read your other poem "Sedona" to, it was a little hard for me to get, but I really liked the dialogue in, it was something else.
Hope you're ok my friend  

~Broken~
JamesMichael
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15 posted 07-16-2000 04:02 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Good honest reflective writing from your heart and past experiences...men are sluts to...some names they go by would be gigolo, player...David Lee Roth has the coolest song titled "Just a Gigolo...James
Isis
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16 posted 07-16-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

And still others 'get with' someone hoping it'll lead to love, it is confusing enough without another being hypercritical.  We all make mistakes and those that cannot or WILL NOT see that aren't worth time or thought.  
Also it's ok for men to play around or conquer or test the boundaries but not women????  That is certainly chauvinism at it's worst!!!
Great peice hon  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

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...in my boxers...


17 posted 03-23-2002 08:37 PM       View Profile for PoetryIsLife   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetryIsLife

Where does ignoring truth leave us? In stagnation and regression. Seeing the truth, about ourselves and the world around us, helps us improve, helps us change (hopefully for the better), and in the end, we're better of for it. It's painful, but... no pain no gain, to use a phrase not always true.

On to the poem... can I get "I love it in French or Spanish" someone? In English it is getting old. *sigh* I did. For someone to love you only for your tits and ass is to not know the real you, and your many layers.

As to why the girl with so many
is left so alone

Too true. No one takes the time to truely get to know anyone... even though they are crying out for someone to do so with them.



~ Titus

"My body is merely the canvas of my soul."
         ~ The Night Owl

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